If an email has a job (register, buy, attend, download, act), the subject line and opening line need to name a real problem (or need) your audience already has, ideally in the words they’d actually use.
Not clever, or cute and defo not “we’re excited to announce”.
Specific!!
What this looks like in practice
Instead of: “Introducing our new solution”
Try: “Why your open rates drop every time you promote something”
Instead of: “Last chance to register”
Try: “Is worth your time?”
Instead of: “Webinar reminder”
Try: “How to fix X without doing Y”
When someone reads a subject line and thinks “I’ve literally been asking that”, you’ve won.
One simple rule to use this week
For any goal-driven email (not newsletters), ask yourself before you send:
What question is already in their head right now?
Then make that the subject line and keep enforcing this through your entire email messaging.
If you can’t answer that, the email probably doesn’t need sending yet.
I’ve broken down the exact copy frameworks I use (PAS, BAB, PPPP, AIDA) - with examples, in this guide below.